Thursday, 24 September 2015

BUT UNDER THE EARTH...

                                       100 word challenge

       Once upon a time there was a family that was very rich they had everything from gold to a mansion.But under the earth there were lots of diamonds they had been looking for diamonds there whole life and finally they found some.So they hired a mining team to find the diamonds for them.Soon they had a pile of diamonds the family was so glad that they finally had everything in the world.They had to buy another house to fit all their unicorns.Finally they had five houses they were so tired they ate pickles and fell asleep.


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  2. hi norah I really liked your work but when you said you got up you were out of the moment other wise I think it was okay also try to add more detail that story reinded me about the spooky spectacular! in our school how you come up with the Hallaween
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    1. Thanks for that information Sarah, I`ll take that into consideration next time.

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    2. Thanks for that information Sarah, I`ll take that into consideration next time.

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